Thursday, January 15, 2009

Linear Beginnings

With all the great feedback I've managed to make some great strides in my animation. Haha, anyway, if anybody sees this and wants to comment on the poses so far it would be awesome.

11sec_linearBeginnings from Paul Fuller on Vimeo.

1 comment:

andoru said...

I am liking this one quite a bit, sorry I didn't comment on the last one, but I had faith in you.

The woman's poses look much better, I think it is a good idea to keep her movements pretty subtle and sad while his are very exaggerated and sure of himself. Which you already have going on to an extent.

You may want to look into getting his left hand moving a little bit more, it is hanging there a little bit.

It would be pretty funny if he pulled the pipe in half and kind of smiled right at the end.

Keep up the good work sir! I may join you on the next one.